Will someone please start a web class on how in the fuck to title poetry...

Hmmm...you've got me thinking.

I see that poetry communicates what it does not only in terms of imagery, alliterations, similies, metaphors and so on, but also in how it is structured in terms of the number of words in each line. I think the credit goes to you for that. You have illustrated the 'puppeteers' 'string' by putting a single word in each line and thus married poetry with art my friend. If i was to innovate this, i would put a single alphabet on each line. Of course this would not have been possible if you hadn't put this idea, perhaps unwittingly, into my head in the first place. The content of the above is simple, but the paragraphic structure goes with it impressively well. The title, 'string symphyses' comes to mind. (symphyses - a place where two bones are immovably joined.)

Thank you PV.

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